Thursday, January 24, 2008

When Time Won'T Pass Comments

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forever is in aloneness
aloneness is forever
its in your mind
but attitude is everything
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shannon wright
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Ian Bowen 24 January 2008

Enjoyed your poem. Well written. Ian

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Lynda Robson 24 January 2008

Good poem Shannon and I like the bit about having a glass of wine while waiting to time to pass lol, a ten for this, Lynda xx

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Sarah Abdullah 24 January 2008

Ummmmmmmmmm Really Nice when time wont pass endurance is the key I Like this Part ALOT Thx for Writitng it ^_^

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