Sunday, June 17, 2007

When Time Taught Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

When time taught me the quantum of zero and universe
Unto my swings of stance across the wings of tears slashed
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Miriam Maia Padua 21 January 2009

superb piece..with words so refreshing....comforting felt like floating in the clouds of divinity... can make one's heart feel the lightness and the feeling of freedom from uncertainties.... when time taught me....makes my doubts subside...10+++++++

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Greenwolfe 1962 22 April 2008

There is a Heavenly comfort in ones own language. GW62

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Tsira Goge 02 March 2008

Hi subhendu, 'when all my senses gathered upon for willful nectar being relished upon the notch of gesture amidst the crowd...' _Deep philosophy and fine work... Thanks, Tsira

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Linda Weischedel 26 November 2007

Very good poem for sure, totally kept me focused! Hugs, Linda

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Raul Castelan 26 June 2007

This poem has a lot of meaning in it which really good. I like the way you flowed with your stanzas. GREAT JOB! ! !

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