When Things Go Wrong Comments

I READ THIS AND I LIKE IT, YOU ARE A GREAT ADVISER DEAR, KEEP IN THAT WAY, I COULD LIKE TO WRITE MORE BUT MY INGLISH IS SO BAD LOL

A nice poem full of expression. I invite you to read some of mine & comment.

Bagus, kejadian sehari-hari yang disusun menjadi puisi. lanjutkan!

Really, very expressive

That was a good poem so keep it up thats how we should feel

not bad i like it and it also can inspire too thumbs up

This is something I put up somewhere as a motto. For I feel and believe everything you said true. It has the wisdom of confidence. Cheers good poem.

That was amazing.True talent

This is pretty good.

Thank you, everyone! #One love God bless y'all and thank you for your support.

A very inspirational poem by a young poet. Great insight...very good for self esteem building especially for younger people facing hard times.

Well Done! As an optimist, you suggest the readers to make their dreams come true, they should believe their inner potentiality a-nd step ahead in the well chosen way with hope. One should change the way and proceed to realise one's dream.' Be flexible to achieve your goal' is the theme. Really I am jealous of your mental faculties. In your teen age, You write as a matured poet.Cheers! I recalled the lines of Robert Frost. Great Writing!

Wow, This is a very good poem. You chose your words correctly. It is a very good poem, please continue making them, you're a good poet.

Always remember, not everyone will like your writings....i enjoyed the poem, im kind of a motivational speaker myself....with this attitude you will go far..keep at it Luzia...thanks for the invite.

I like it in a small way it describes a small part of me. So I enjoyed the poem thank you for Sending me a message.

A good write and a great philosophy for life.

This is an inspirational writeup and the message is very clear, and it bears good news to the weary hearts... But its poetic arrangement and organisation...including the choose of word is not that good..its kinda raw, like it was written first hand and was never refine...sound kinda like prose...but a good prose it is. Thanks for sharing....you are a good writer, and you can also work on these issues. You can read my poem....Surreal....+ Leave a comment/criticism.....Thanks again

Great poem Luzia! If I can call you by the name you say you prefer.... I like the message and I like your positive spirit. I hope it takes you a long way. Thank you - and God bless you..

Well done Lucia! You're poem is very inspiring and you're a talented writer! Thanks for the invite and...keep writing poetry!

I apologize, but i've just never been a fan of motivational speakers.