Tuesday, November 26, 2019

When Things Go Comments

Rating: 5.0

When Google answers for everything,
And You Tube has tunes that all songs sing,
When medics sit in bliss,
There happen things like this.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Mahtab Bangalee 27 November 2019

superb limerick on postmodern user of google, youtube...ctc//

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 November 2019

Thanks for visiting and appreciation, dear MB

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Bharati Nayak 26 November 2019

Wow- -A great poem on the present day scenario - - -Many things have become easy- -We get all information, music, entertainment, and whole sea of knowledge at the click of the mouse, but people go easy and also develop a ruining attitude towrds hard work and service to mankind.

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 November 2019

When Things Go Online not, When Things Go I don't know why PH is not correcting it. Any way your comments are in place. When there is too much dependence on machines, I don't know which way the evolution will go. Online too? Thank you Bharatiji

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 November 2019

The caption of this limerick should be When Things Go Online. The word 'Online' is still missing after editing twice.

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Mihaela Pirjol 26 November 2019

This limerick is how a Limerick should be! Well-composed!

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 November 2019

Well, you are right. A traditional limerick is anapaest tri-meter (first second, and the fifth lines) , and bi-meter for the third and fourth lines. It's alright breaking/twisting rules, provided what is produced is all the better for it, not otherwise. Thanks for visiting.

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