Sunday, September 13, 2015

When Things Are Hard... Comments

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When you are not able
To move your hand
I feel as if my own
Arm feels the pain.
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla
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Roseann Shawiak 26 September 2015

Beautiful portrayal of love between two people, loving and taking care of a loved one, no matter what! Being as one, feeling pain of the other when they are going through a difficult time, just BEing there for them! That is an unconditional love to be sure. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Amitava Sur 24 September 2015

Love's basic theme is Care and share what I can see prominently in this write. Thanks for sharing.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 17 September 2015

When you are not able To move your hand I feel as if my own Arm feels the pain. really extraordinary to feel this way TC..

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 September 2015

Your poem reveals true love among wife and husband or among two hearts where husband wishes healing of his wife as earlier as possible. Nice poem sharing. ....10

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David Wood 14 September 2015

True love is to always care for your loved one through everything that life throws at you. Lovely poem.

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Valsa George 14 September 2015

I understand the context of the poem. Hope she is recovering fast! When she is in pain, you feel the pain. Yes, that ability for empathy is the one that cements relationships, especially the one between a husband and wife!

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 13 September 2015

A beautiful poem of thanksgiving and being one with one's beloved. Prayers for a speedy heal.

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