Wednesday, October 27, 2010

When They Mention Your Name Comments

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When they mention your name,
I pretend I don't hear.
I never pass any blame,
But I can't hide my tears.
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Juan Olivarez
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Lynn Glover 27 October 2010

A very beautiful but sad write, as most of us can relate. I really love the rhythem of the poem, but wished for a better ending. A great poem by a very powerful writer. Lynn.

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