When They Held Hands Comments

WOW! This poem is a psychodrama. I envisioned a film as I read it with the first portion of it showing the world the people they pretend to be in the false world they've built to hide the reality. The second half would show the breakdown of this elaborate hoax. I can imagine viewers being sad that this seemingly ideal relationship was a fabrication. I know I am. But the truth must prevail over illusions, that's what your poem affirms.