When They All Fall Asleep Comments
In dead of night when they all fall asleep
In earth's accommodating lap.
All my pains cripple down in my heart
Capsizing it under pain's domain.
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An intriguing portrait of sadness, intensely describing your inner pain through loss. They all start chewing that soft heart so recklessly making me cry, that line is defining through imagery, your pain. It is so stark and unrelenting, making me feel it's crippling pain within my own heart. Definitely a poetical sorrow that can never be contained in this life, as you've so aptly written in this poem. Give it a 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Thank you for sharing your heart, a really touching poem. RoseAnn
Sad but beautifully composed. Outpouring of pain is very strong here. Thanks for sharing.
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8/5/2025 5:08:05 AM # 1.0.0
An intriguing portrait of sadness, intensely describing your inner pain through loss. They all start chewing that soft heart so recklessly making me cry, that line is defining through imagery, your pain. It is so stark and unrelenting, making me feel it's crippling pain within my own heart. Definitely a poetical sorrow that can never be contained in this life, as you've so aptly written in this poem. Give it a 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Thank you for sharing your heart, Amitava, a really touching poem. RoseAnn