When There's Nobody Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

When There's Nobody

Rating: 5.0


When there's nobody
And you raise your hand
In supplication
There is somebody
Straight up there
Who thinks about
Your conditions
Who is reaching out
To envelop you
In the folds of rahmat.

© Aarzoo Mehek

When There's Nobody
Friday, September 11, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: god,grace,prayers
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 11 September 2020

Yes amidst nobody is the somebody enveloping under grace. Beautiful words. Admirations.

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Michael Jack 12 September 2020

Precise and to the point. Straight to the Creator

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It is God dear poetess

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M Asim Nehal 12 September 2020

Indeed, Beshak. Faith and Hope are two legs on which I walk this life. 10++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 October 2023

Yes, in such helpless situation, there is somebody straight up there! I believe so.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 April 2022

An honest and sublime poem... appreciated. Top score.

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Anjandev Roy 18 September 2020

This is absolutely glorious.......thank u.....anjandev roy.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 September 2020

There is someone out there! ! ! ! Waiting for your supplications. True love is the key! With the muse of hope. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rajnish Manga 12 September 2020

That's a reflection of the poet's inner feelings with regard to prayer or the way it is performed. It is clear that there has to be silence, no distraction, complete submission with absolute faith before committing himself or herself with their prayers to have God's rahmat and His supreme protection. Thanks, Aarzoo Sahiba..

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