Thursday, July 7, 2011

When The World Is Quiet Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the world is quiet and only you can hear you self speak
You vent your feelings to the moon
It sparkles with the stars stairing at you
You hear nothing but crickets and
a dropp of water fall from somewhere distant
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 07 July 2011

Great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. I really liked and rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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