James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Saturday, June 27, 2009

When The Wind Moans Moon Comments

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Running with breath through the moss
I come up along the window of your sight.
You stand there still taught and tight two tips
pressed against my eyes as your Payne.
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Priyanka Bhowmick 27 June 2009

wonderful composition. esp. the concluding lines...

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Emancipation Planz 27 June 2009

iip... the wind may moan, yet you 'howl' her expressions well in this one..; love the brightness reflected in your closing line:

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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