Sunday, June 3, 2018

When The Wind Blew With Fury [ Tanka ] Comments

Rating: 5.0

Frail trees were broken
When the wind blew with fury
Its temper raging
Breaking things along its path
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Nudershada Cabanes
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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 December 2018

Frail trees were broken When the wind blew with fury.....so touching and true. Wind has much force. A beautiful Tanka is nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.10

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Kostas Lagos 03 June 2018

Nudershada, what a fantastic tanka! Thanks!

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Thank you Father Kostas. Happy to read your comment.

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Paul Brookes 03 June 2018

from roar to whimper as it slldes on its way to blow at others great write enjoyed

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Thank you Paul for your comment.

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Aarzoo Mehek 03 June 2018

The fury of nature..well penned.

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Thank you Aarzoo for your comment and visit.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 03 June 2018

Nuder, such a well crafted tanka๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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It's nice to read your comment Kabayang Bernard.

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