When The Whole World Goes Wrong Comments

I Like this on some time i guess we all feel this way i just cant seem to put this kind on paper wish i could

Wow a thrilling write and excellent ideas. it is true one ust accept how the world is it is good.

wow what a write! very chilling. a powerful and imaginative write. great insight. great poem.10's all of the way my friend. Jen

nice work keep it up...10

When whole world goes wrong one should dance in sarong...........a good write.

Your writing style is fascinating.Well penned.You did a good job here. Love and hugs, Meggie

Imagine.... humans are immobile; Their brains are still active. And the plants, the animals and demons taking advantage to knock you down. Lol Chilling scenario. Fearsome write.

I think it was a very good reminder of what we take for granted 10+++ from me

well written message of awareness...good job...

a timely reminder for us all...thank you John

a very powerful way of reminding human beings the value of life...10+

imagine... beautiful imagination...but...how? please read my poem 'the world'..............

Does it take us humans to imagine all this to prove a point? ! Actually, ...YES! ! ! I only hope it doesn't come true....though history has shown man to be atrocious...and beastly... Cheers. Subroto

nice message..........hope we all realise that without any such thing happening.......i like your style of writing.....simple yet wonderful......easily understandable by all...... excellent poem

hi dear, a very nice poem. all creatures have a place on earth and they should be respected for that.you have created a wonderfull poem. words are beautifull and meaningfull too. i will be uploading a new poem ' crocs and the kind doctor' will tell you voted 10 surya

imagination is our silent sanctuary when all the things dont come in our way....mmmm, great!

just imagine...great poem says a lot we should take heed

Imagine, you are our last meal..the table is you..everybody starves..while you wait..knowing, as we all sits down around you..these, our, us, we haves very small mouths..to start eating on you..and every scream you screams just makes you tastes even better..., just imagine you...having such imagination..while we wait for more of your words to eats...just imagines...iip

a very imaginative write anusha..and you have written it very well...i had written ine on trees walking..in 'a never ending story-an exploitation'..only the trees walked..in your poem the animals talk..truely interesting...write more in your own style

wow nice poem man well done a very valid point about things goin wrong keep up the good work 10+++ fade jenkins plz visit my poems