Tuesday, January 14, 2020

When The Sunset Meets The Sea Comments

Rating: 4.9

The Sunset scatters
Its pink and orange colors
When it meets the Sea
They give birth to a bright paint
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Shaun Cronick 06 August 2020

Bright and most vibrant poems are worth a second look and again rewarded 10+ and simply thank you Rose Marie for sharing your wondrous poetry gift.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 February 2020

So sorry for my small error: not " vreations" but " creations" Thank YOU!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 February 2020

The Sunset scatters Its pink and orange colors When it meets the Sea They give birth to a bright paint On a lovely blue canvas................mesmerizing..Such greatest wonder God's before our own eyes. We can watch these greatest Blessings each day again, we can read this biggest treat time and again on this poetic canvas which you have created with own barren hands, the greatest gift from God. A gem of a poem to keep, dearest Mrs. Juan Austin. God's Blessings be greatest upon thee.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 February 2020

As if I am coming home to see and watchn this most beautiful painting in a poem again. Two loveliest facts and prettiest scenes that I love most and crazily, two mingles of poetry and painting I truly love so dashingly. I am happiest to be here again, my sunset of the day. I add here a full score of 10 and of 10++++++ endlessly, since your thoughts and being have endless vreations in more than these 10's

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Bharati Nayak 27 January 2020

The Sunset scatters Its pink and orange colors When it meets the Sea They give birth to a bright paint On a lovely blue canvas. - - - -Wow- -such a beauty captured in this word -painted canvas!

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 January 2020

wow superb imagery of Sunset is delineated in this short poem// afterglow the radiance-light of the west sky reflects dazzling on the ripple of mind river!

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Sandra Feldman 23 January 2020

This poem is a painting Of great sensibility, Bringing images together Of incredible, Beauty. I just love this poem, it blends together in a rare and magnificent endeavor, two art forms, poetry and painting And now, I will safe keep it, in my heart. Thank you for this incredible, Gift!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 January 2020

A very impressing scene for eyes that can catch sun's change during the sunset. If our eyes could catch this scene wholly, WOW! A very endearing and loveliest final of true colours before our eyes! Nature gives us this most beautiful painting each sunsetting day. Such a happy emotions I get after having read this jewel of a poem. A 10++ for the Beauty of this Jewel. Up ToMyPoemList. Thank you so much for sharing this Beauty that not every one can discover.

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Shaun Cronick 19 January 2020

Rose Marie I can always find time to re-read a beautiful poem. And while I'm here enjoying it again I'll give it another 10++. I thank you again good Rose Marie and take care.

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Shaun Cronick 17 January 2020

Short but ever so sweet sweet. Nicely conveyed for one and all good Rose Marie. One to bring a warm cheer to all hearts in these cold winter months. Thank you for writing and sharing this gemstone.

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 January 2020

Great imagination indeed. Short and lovely one.10++

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Anjandev Roy 15 January 2020

Outstanding write. Thank u, dear poetess.anjandev roy.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 January 2020

A well composed amazing poem....10+++ I love it, dear ate Rose🙏❤️😍

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Kostas Lagos 15 January 2020

A poetic canvas painted with the most beautiful colors! 10!

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 January 2020

...and yes, 'enchanting poetess', I agree with Akhtar Jawad saa'b.

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 January 2020

Great observation very well expressed in five lines. As I said in one of my poems, it gives pink and orange from its spectral band, and gets it back on a blue canvas, what you give you get

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Akhtar Jawad 14 January 2020

A nice description of aurora with the entire mastery of the enchanting poetess.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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