Sunday, October 22, 2017

When The Sun Shines Comments

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When the sun shines on the wall
When the wind blows on the tree
At once there's a shadow art
Does the tall tree on the wall
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Indira Renganathan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 December 2017

The shadow art is amazingly captured through magnificent poetic imagination! How we perceive shadows that matters! The last stanza is very realistic. I would quote, ”…. Never can man boast of himself/As they are the pioneers/To beat man in shadow art” A very insightful and commendable piece of poetry! Thank you dear madam for sharing!

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Akhtar Jawad 05 November 2017

A poem written so nicely, shadows are formed but it's our approach how we see these shadows, a beautiful mind sees beauty in the shadows and an ugly mind sees ugliness in the shadows.

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Indira Renganathan 05 November 2017

I feel much honoured by your comment Akhtar...thank you

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Bharati Nayak 31 October 2017

When the sun shines on the wall When the wind blows on the tree At once there's a shadow art Does the tall tree on the wall Now a giraffe then a seahorse All and all for me to wonder Well I think that all in nature Happy of wind and light they dance - - - - - - Sun, wind, tree- - -this Nature is the best Artist, engaged in myriad creations.A wonderful poem, thanks for sharing.

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Indira Renganathan 01 November 2017

Quite pleased Bharati...thank you for your kind visit and comment

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 October 2017

Sunshine, wind, and trees form beautiful art of shadow in different shape and size in an attractive manner. It may be quoted.... Now a giraffe then a seahorse All and all for me to wonder Well I think that all in nature Happy of wind and light they dance Haunting expression. Beautiful poem. Thanks.10

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 October 2017

Simple and beautiful poem on the nature's game with shadow and wall. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

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