When The Sun Rises Comments

I tender to think Sun as a metaphor for hope and bright future. God is Sun, and God is Light. Wonderful piece of flying colours!

I wrote the poem 'Soul Leaps Forth Touches Fingertip Creator' inspired by the poem 'When The Sun Rises' by the poet Rose Marie Juan Austin and dedicated to the poet Rose Marie Juan Austin.

If sun comes with full of its light then the universe gets back its life If sun goes with its light then the universe feels sadness in dark but those people cares the true sun of insightful inside s/he always stays in the enlightened realm of life either sun comes or not

that after false dawn birth moment, when light first fingernail slips, above dark unseen mountain or horizon, when light first spreads out into absolute land darkness, when countless stars in shimmering light twinkling glory, still diamond lace satin dark night sky, on clear nights which reach out touch soul, that is the moment when spirit sudden rapture rises, unstoppable leaps forth touches fingertip creator

Sun is the ruler of clocks That sets day and night The great marker Of humanity's time. You are right, the sun is the time keeper of hunmanity. When the sun rises all beings rise up and engage in each one's way and with the sunset all keep themselves under the night blanket and rest. You have beautifully conveyed the truth..10

3) I cite here your last stanza after I have cited the two previous ones: Sun is the ruler of clocks That sets day and night The great marker Of humanity's time...............................Absolutely true! A very impressive poem with powerful words and magnificent metaphors. I like most all three stanzas, this gem goes straight to MyPoemsList. A 10 Full Score for the most beauteous poem of the great poetess.

2) When the sun let her golden beams rest And hides in its private place The world changes its dress From the blanket of the night And humanity rests.....When we were still on our way to home, and it was night, we looked for a hotel and rest/slept there. So true humanity rests, a gorgeous second stanza and so mesmerizing. Crystal clear conveyed and at such a fascinating way. Full of Brilliance.

When the sun rises It ignites the world And humanity rises As its rays cascade Everyone is fueled to shine. INDEED, we just arrived from Normandy (France) and I saw the sun arising, that was a WOW! Your poem reminds me of that arriving home again. How loveliest worded.

Yes, sun sets all the clocks and creates day and night! Day is for work and night is for rest. With sunset, the world covers itself in the blanket of darkness and men withdraw to the cozy comfort of their blankets...! What a magnificent arrangement by our Great Creator! Rose Marie, you have beautifully described the rise of the sun, the spread of light and the day's transition to night. A sure 10

Sun is the ruler of clocks That sets day and night The great marker Of humanity's time.........wonderful poem on the power of the brilliant Sun - the great ruler! Amazing expression and metaphor......Dear Poetess Rose......10

When the sun let her golden beams rest And hides in its private place The world changes its dress From the blanket of the night And humanity rests. What a great imagination.. tony

Sunrise! ! ! ! Sunshine love! With the romance of nature and, The fragrance of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Great write about the sun. Nicely crafted to make it beautiful reading.

I love your beautiful poem on sunshine time. It's in my list.

the personification of the planet earth.....awaking /undressing redressing/resting to the solar tune is the mastery of your imagination as a seasoned poetess..worth reading ad finitum

A wonderful write of the sun's magic light...well penned

The great marker Of humanity's time.......excellent write.....thank u.....anjandev roy.

A most enchanting and highly pleasing poetic work! Three most charming stanzas. The interaction of life with Time, the Sun being the protagonist in this lovely poetic dance. The last stanza, a marvel, one of the best ever written on the subject! " Sun is the ruler of clocks That sets day and night, The great maker Of humanity's time." A true delight.

What a beautiful poem showing the connection and relation to the good earth, just beautiful! ! ! If you wish, read my poem...my blue child....it also shows the connection, but be proud, best poem I have read in quite awhile

The sun gives life. It ripens fruit, but it burns my poor skin when I'm in my birthday suit*! *birthday suit American slang for being naked