Monday, July 24, 2006

When The Sun Goes Down Comments

Rating: 5.0

Momma says God'll build us a house
and it'll be made of gold
and the windows'll be spun from diamonds
and its walls'll never fold.
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Liz Oates
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Romeo Della Valle 01 July 2011

Liz, this is an excellent, well penned and poignant write which shows me that you definitely have the talent to make through the poetry world in due time. I really enjoyed your work! Keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ...

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Brittany Meyne 24 July 2006

hey lizzie, that was a really good poem and i was in the hurricane katrina rita 2 so it meant alot when i read it

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