When The Storm Comes Around Comments
Should you find yourself at the captain’s helm,
as everyone around you is jumping ship.
Do not lose your stride.
Do not miss a step.
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dear friend, this is a nice work. but pls try to shorten the lines. regards binish
alot of optomism in here! This is very encouraging! great work!
i love this one...it reminds me of the lord always watching out for us and helping us through our toughest times.10+
very vivid great, i fealt as if i were in the middle of a storm u showed ur compasion and loyality to the other fantastic work
I have been reading a few of your poetry, they are all so far very well structured and have a chronological feel to them.
It showed so much loyalty between two people. I definitly give it a 10!
Interesting use of words, Thought provoking on life and it's trials and yet in it's simplest terms a poem of love... all in all a great poem.. Feel free to read mine anytime...
what every woman wants to hear. 'All you must do is reach out and take my hand. I will calm those panicked thoughts causing your mind to spin.' Great write
An Amazing Poem full of imagery! ! Everyone needs a friend to stand by their side during the storms of life! !
that was the best poem i read on poemhunter. i like it =)
I like this. It kind of like my poem, House of Cards, but with more imagery. My poems tend to be very simple, but you've balanced simple and detailed here. Well done.
great poem.. and it''s very meaningful too...it's a wonderful feeling to see the storm going away while we are in the arms of those we love
Great imagery poem. A good message from the heart Well penned I like it very much. Thanks for sharing with me 10++
Pregnant with poetic promises that makes for a fantastic friendship. Well done my friend.
A poem pregnant with profound promises that makes for a fastastic frienship. Well done my friend.
Very descriptive poem, using a nautical theme to serve as the pulpit for explication of your devotion to friendship..very clever! Well done!
Great Detail, it was very very good, . Keep writing. Ill be glady to read
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7/23/2025 6:01:17 AM # 1.0.0
Great imagery, and comraderie, great stuff.