When The Sky Opened Comments
Only in my dreams do you come to me
in a silhouette of sun rays merging with my moon light
your lips are my flame
an apple in ripeness
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'when the sky opened...', and the winged creature that is your soul flew free!
look into your eyes where white doves sit on its pupil embracing the core of me human
A very beautiful poem Kasia! ! Excellent detail. Enjoyed reading it. Williams, T.
oh when the sky opened of course... i love the detail....lovely
Dream, eternity and divinity all are present in this superb piece.Kasia, really I loved it.10+++
ahaaa...this is one of the best i ever read...i love everything from beginning till the end...kudos.. :)
Fervent and religious....zealous in passion Deep and allegorical Well conceived and forceful Nice write...ageless, timeless Cheers sat
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8/2/2025 9:07:56 AM # 1.0.0
on feathers of creation... white doves sit on its pupil... some wonderful images! the title itself is another....