Friday, June 26, 2015

When The Reaper Wails Comments

Rating: 4.8

When the reaper wails, the soul cries out,
It screams and shouts inside the body,
''Thine last place has arrived, thou shalt not survive! '' he screams,
The soul, it hugs the body, utterly distressed,
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Sara Javed
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Akhtar Jawad 13 January 2016

It's a great poem. Great thoughts presented in beautiful worlds and lovely lines, and an universal message that attracts readers from all corners of the world....................................10

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Herbert Dry 08 August 2015

Life swallowed up in death, a struggle even the strong cannot claim victory, Keep your words and thoughts in print so we all may enjoy.

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Sara Javed 09 August 2015

Thank you! This is so very kind of you! Xx

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Me Myself And I... 07 August 2015

Love it, a real 'writer' we have on PH...Awesome! ! !

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Sara Javed 08 August 2015

I am purely delighted by this comment! Thank you! Xx

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Chinedu Dike 02 July 2015

A moment of reckoning when the cold hands of death squeezes life out of its victims and sends its soul into eternity, well imagined and insightfully depicted in the poem. A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned in poetic diction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Sara Javed 05 July 2015

Thank you so much! I will surely read it! X

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Kelly Kurt 26 June 2015

A heartfelt and haunting poem, Sara. Thanks for sharing. Peace

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Sara Javed 27 June 2015

Thanks you so much! !

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Sara Javed

Sara Javed

Lahore, Pakistan
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