Sunday, November 13, 2016

When The Rain Came Comments

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It hadn't rained for months
The earth was beginning to turn in on itself
Forming a hard, crusty shell
Against the harshness of the world
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Annabel Cruz
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Kim Barney 13 November 2016

I like the symbolism of the rain carrying away all her tears (and maybe fears) . Well done.

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