Saturday, September 12, 2015

When The Pain No Longer Hurts Comments

Rating: 4.5

His hand outstretched,
as he tugged the tail
of her garb.
He gently yanked her to
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Collette Y Anderson Williams
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Chilling. Tormenting.

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Chinedu Dike 17 September 2019

A poignant piece of poetry well articulated and nicely crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. A very passionate write.

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Thank you so much, Chinedu.

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W Gray 09 October 2015

Well-written, loved the choice of words, gave life to the poem's meaning.

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Thank you for your comments, W. Gray.

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Collette Y Anderson Williams 15 September 2015

Hello Everyone, thank you for taking the time to read my poem. Your feedback helps.

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Godfrey Morris 13 September 2015

Awesome write. Enjoyed reading

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Della Perry 13 September 2015

I liked the way it shows how love can be beautiful and yet hurt at the same time. It was fast paced, I enjoyed reading this. Well done, good imagery too.

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You comments are welcomed, Della. Thank you.

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Kelly Kurt 12 September 2015

A well written and chilling poem, Collette. Thank you for sharing. Peace

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You're most welcome, Kelly. It's my pleasure.

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