His hand outstretched,
as he tugged the tail
of her garb.
He gently yanked her to
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A poignant piece of poetry well articulated and nicely crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. A very passionate write.
Well-written, loved the choice of words, gave life to the poem's meaning.
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I liked the way it shows how love can be beautiful and yet hurt at the same time. It was fast paced, I enjoyed reading this. Well done, good imagery too.
A well written and chilling poem, Collette. Thank you for sharing. Peace
Chilling. Tormenting.