Wednesday, April 8, 2020

When The Ocean Is Still Comments

Rating: 5.0

On the canvas of the ocean
There is no jumping up and down
All waves are cancelled
All fish are quarantined
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Kenneth Maswabi
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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 April 2020

What an expression you have made! It touches the hearts of the poets and poetesses soon. So brilliant. Let me cite some lines...On the canvas of the ocean / There is no jumping up and down / All waves are cancelled / All fish are quarantined / Dolphins are hypnotized Marvelous work. Full vote.

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Kenneth Maswabi

Kenneth Maswabi

Maun, Botswana
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