Today it feels like the ocean brimmeths over
in shades of an unwashed olive and opaque teal
the grey waters all turbid with discontent
leap at a spent pock marked bay
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Celestial super ways are made through beauty of perception and expression. The point of overflowing of each sea wave gives a better pockmark and you have wonderfully noticed the leap. Still there is something that pulls mind down suddenly. Instance of combustion mutely torches inside and this gives wonderful sensation. A beautiful poem is very brilliantly penned with nice imagery...10
tugging into poetic depths