Tuesday, September 1, 2020

When The Night Is Silent Comments

Rating: 4.8

When the night is silent
Check out the cries
Of a withering heart
It has the most extreme uproar
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Anjandev Roy 05 October 2023

This is simply glorious...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 October 2023

Thoughtfully put

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 October 2023

An insightful piece of poetry.... thoughtful put. Extremely well penned dear poetess Aarzoo.5 stars

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Rajnish Manga 02 September 2020

I am amazed at the way the 'cries of the withering heart' are treated 'When The Night Is Silent'. Nothing tangible but the fall out in spiritual terms is beyond measure. The innocence of heart and it's supplications reach the abode of God. Thanks for sharing.

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It laments of its lost innocence. Misunderstanding the innocence of our heart is the most painful blow in life. Definitely its supplications will reach God. A touching poem deserving much....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 September 2020

Lovely sentiments, dear poet, When A Night Is Silent..

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Sharad Bhatia 01 September 2020

Good morning M'am, . Beautiful words about " night" and its activities. Apparently " the night is black and no one hears our call except" Allah " .

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M Asim Nehal 01 September 2020

- 2- - Ek Uljhi Hui Tasweer Bana Rakha Hai Kuch Samajh Mein Nahin Aata Ke Ye Chakr Kya Hai Khel Kya Tum Ne Azal Se Ye Racha Rakha Hai Rooh Ko Ke Pinjray Ka Bana Kar Qaidi Uss Pe Phir Maut Ka Pehra Bhi Bitha Rakha Hai De Ke Tadbeer Kay Panchi Ko Uraanein Tum Ne Tam-e-takdeer Mein Har Simt Bicha Rakha Hai Kar Ke Araaishein Konain Ki Barson Tum Ne Khatm Karne Ka Bhi Mansooba Bana Rakha Hai

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M Asim Nehal 01 September 2020

Wow......Nice one. A broken heart wants immediate justice. I believe in fate and I quote IMAAN-E-MUFASSAL Aamantu billaahi wa malaa-ikatihi wa kutubihi wa rusulihi wal yaumil aakhiri wal qadri khairihi wa sharrihi minallaahi ta'aala wal ba-si badal maut. We will get suitable reward for everything including disloyalties. I am sure you must have heard " Tum Ek Gorah Dhandha Ho " By Nusrat Fateh Ali Khan Saheb...If not please do. I quote few lines- -1

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Varsha M 01 September 2020

Beautiful words. Insightful. Thank-you.

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