Tuesday, July 8, 2008

When The Night Comes Comments

Rating: ★3.5

I sit here at night
Thinking of you
Wondering where you are
And longing to be with you
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Shelby Lanier
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Greenwolfe 1962 17 July 2008

The rhymes are good but the rhythm is very shaky. I could only give it a 7 because of that mostly. It also is on a subject that is frequently written about. That means it needs something to distinguish it from another of its kind. I just didn't see that. GW62

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Shelby Lanier

Shelby Lanier

Raliegh, North Carolina
Shelby Lanier
Shelby Lanier
Raliegh, North Carolina
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