When The Morning Dew Drips - Tanka Comments

Nice imagery. Dew sunshine and spider web together make a morning garden great

"The wildest wild garden shines" and ever so brightly!

Revisiting I find it so marvellous!

Keen observation. We can see cob webs in various shapes like spread nets, hollow tunnel etc. wth dew drops waiting to be vaporised in the early sun

Did I already suggest 'hide' for 'hid' and a period at end of line 2? bri : )

I'll give it 4 stars. I like it. I had to check on structure of modern tankas and you have the 5-7-5-7-7. Very nice. bri ;)

Rose Marie, I'd use 'hide', not 'hid'. And I think line 2 should end with a period; I don't see one, & I can barely see one at end of your last line. bri:

The imagery and the magical awe of nature is so beautifully captured here! .. This also reminds me of very special times with my Mom! ..

Oh, So deeply beautiful! .. Such wonderous fantastic imagery! .. And feeling spun into this! .. Beyond #ing! ..++++++++++++++++++

Brilliant work......thank u, dear poetess.

TWO: and indeed the wildest wild garden shines.5 Stars Top score and myriad more for this morning Beauty. I have utmost enjoyed, dear friend

ONE: I cite from your poem these lines: When the morning dew Drips and the great sun rises..............so very imaginable, a most glistening scene lay in front of us, this is a fascinating Tanka from your own surrounds, dear friend, how truthfully described

Yes I agree with Unnikrishnan I would love to be there Bravo!

Enchanting beautiful picture of the garden in the dawn. Loved it, Rose Marie. Top score. And onto Myfavourites