When The Moon Wanes Comments
It was a bright night
With the full moon and sea of stars
At the celestial dome
His wife went
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Oh, how romantic, and moving! .. Filled with such deep beauty and sentiment! .. Beautifully heart touching! ... Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++
Mental disorder. coupled with doomed feelings. Man is a machine of momentary mind. A well written poem that tells how trivial are happiness and the life itself 10+
This is a beautiful poem - captured the feelings of living with someone with mental illness.
But he knows Deep inside Her happiness Is just a flash of lightning Which pierced through the darkness........nice poetic expression, Loved these lines.
Such a beautiful poem of love...I really love this poem and it was done beautifully...10+++
It is really a beautiful poem having wonderful imagination and touching expression. Theme is nice and comparison of love with moon wanes is fantastic. Thanks for sharing.
Such is love when the moon wanes, when a good poem takes my hand, I become part of the poem, I saw her face, her smile that carried me beyond reality, and as in the movies, I was hopelessly in love with the star, knowing deep inside that the moon will indeed change the tides, your poem is excellent! ! ! Bravo my friend! Very well penned!
How beautifully and delicately different from the so called savage love practiced today.. A truly romantic moonlit piece.
A well constructed write with a powerful message. Your imagery is superb.
Splendidly penned Rose Marie. There is beauty and sadness in this exquisite poem.10 Nudershada
Yes, when the moon wanes, nothing well exists but sadness, pains and all ill thoughts, wonderful write, thanks for sharing the poem with us,10
A wonderful insight, Muzahidul. Thank you for your time and visit.
Her sweetest kiss! ! And his heart will bleed for her! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A magnificent piece of poetry with splendid poetic expression: When the moon wanes/She will be enveloped With despair and sadness.....Appreciated.....10
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7/19/2025 2:37:39 PM # 1.0.0
Extremely nice Madam your description.His heart would bleed for her is galvanizing.