Tuesday, June 23, 2009

When The Moon Talks. Comments

Rating: 5.0

You forgot me
i see
technology took u away from me
I see
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zeinab sherif
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 25 July 2010

me too, I like this poem like i hear a background music that fits here....

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Kuji Soliman 27 August 2009

i loved this poem so much! ! ! you have a natural gift

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Obinna Eruchie 01 August 2009

A very lovely poem, Zeinab, keep it up.

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Broken Heart 15 July 2009

great poem! ! keep up the awesome writing: D

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 05 July 2009

Really awesome, so lovely heart touching, keep it up mam.......

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Catrina Heart 02 July 2009

When the moon talks under the blue we all become sensitive at least! lovely one...

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 July 2009

When the moon talks, there'll be no daylight.................for life.Nice poem Zeinab.I wonder why you banned me.May Allah bless your good deed in generations to come.

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Afzal Shauq 30 June 2009

Remember me every day, please I miss your chitchat which made my soul release Isolate yourself for a while from technology which made your emotions freeze &talk 2 me from the window like before with the scene of the sky &the beautiful breeze. nobody can forget good and sweet people like you the sweet poet with rich emotonal ideas.. appreciate you dear friend for this rich poem...10+++++++++++++

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Allemagne Roßmann 24 June 2009

a while from technology which made your emotions freeze &talk 2 me from the window like before with the scene of the sky &the beautiful breeze...i love it..10+++

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Omar Ibrahim 24 June 2009

fantastic.........i dont believe you are 15! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Eyan Desir 23 June 2009

A bit complex but sweet

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Merna Ibrahim 23 June 2009

A great poem Zeinab...you are right, the technology is ruining so many things.....good work..keep it up 10++.Merna

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 23 June 2009

Nice poem with innocent imagery. keep writing, Zeinab.

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Carol Gall 23 June 2009

great poem good use of words 10

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Afzal Shauq 23 June 2009

Remember me every day, please I miss your chitchat which made my soul release what a sweet and heartfelt innocent words that you omitted from the core of heart.. well done and its really a good poem and try more to do.. best to write the same way you do...appreciate your work..10+++++++++

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