Friday, January 12, 2018

When The Moon Is Spooned Comments

Rating: 5.0

All her worries and all the strains
Fly away like the frightened camphor
Pink ecstasy pinning down the pains.
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Khalid Saifullah 30 December 2018

Love can spoon the moon even, beautiful.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 March 2018

A beautifully crafted write that captures the beauty and wonders of nature with compelling imagery.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 January 2018

The moon smiling below being spooned, Friendly Venus deserves a casual adventure...Loved the beauty of expression! An adorable piece of poetry!

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Khalida Bano Ali 13 January 2018

Such a beautiful poem, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,

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