Sunday, July 20, 2014

When The Moon Covered By Dark Clouds Comments

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When the moon covered by dark clouds
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She wails she moans
Runs hither and thither
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Ronald Chapman 23 July 2014

A truly beautiful picture drawn with words.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 22 July 2014

a beautiful sketch, truly resonates.

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Dinesan Madathil 21 July 2014

The Moon knows a lot about the transient clouds and as the nightly queen of the sky she need not be sad....

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Salini Nair 21 July 2014

To send tons of breaths To wind them away to sea And if promising, melt down Raptures of rains to assuage me………nice sir.....like it

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Triumphing over the temporary is not always easy because our present sometimes dark present reality clouds us in. Yet your poem teaches us that trouble and dark clouds too will pass keep on shining like the moon. Bursting with a beauty that is refreshing my friend!

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Valsa George 20 July 2014

The moon veiled by the clouds may not be very happy! Let the gust of winds drive them away from her countenance, that she will be able to smile once upon all of us! Enjoyed!

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