Saturday, October 13, 2007

When The Living Haunt The Dead Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes the living will haunt you
Much like the dead
Entering your tranquil mind
Just when you believe all memory erased
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Ted Sheridan
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Marvin Brato 19 October 2007

A masterpiece, so much passion and subtlety! Thanks for sharing sir, top marks.

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Farooq Hussain 15 October 2007

well written....sadness is all over in your poem

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x... x... 13 October 2007

So beautiful yet so sad....They grow away from us but more often than not return, than they grow up and are physically gone for good. Parents have many a picture that brings tears to their eyes. You are remarkably talented Ted and I hope you know that........marci.xo

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Thad Wilk 13 October 2007

This was beautiful; sad true, but a work of art! ! (10) ! Thad

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The picture that still brings tears to her mother’s eyes Every time we enter our empty house and see it hanging on the wall pictorial poetry at its best ted.. worth in gold..

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Scarlett Treat 13 October 2007

This one hurt my heart...really hurt. Scarlett

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Oh Ted. Haunting indeed. But sort of exquisititely beautiful with it. t x

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