Friday, May 22, 2009

When The Leaves Promise Us A Serenity Future Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the leaves whistle tender soft whispers;
In reciprocation to the mystical flower bed realms,
When their anxious noses, they dip for ventures;
Into the mysterious calm waters of the green streams.
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Angelic(Annie) Female
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Kesav Easwaran 04 June 2009

Lovely wrtten piece...nice way to go romantic with nature; here whispering leaves...melodoius poem, Annie...10

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Brishti Mazumdar 02 June 2009

t’s left to man to empathize with her freedom of expressions; And help her establish her existence, in an eternal place of pleasure, A nice poem with a strong message.

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Shashendra Amalshan 31 May 2009

this is a nice refreshing...write indeed..good one to get away from the complexities of the life.... thanks for the relaxation..nice..deserves 10 regards shan

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Reshma Ramesh 31 May 2009

beautiful............clap clap...well said

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Shekhar Joshi 28 May 2009

Simply amazing.... great imagery.... wonderfully beautiful poem..10/10 surely

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Shashendra Amalshan 28 May 2009

'These are mother nature’s pleas to mankind through her mannerisms; For if we help save the leaves, she promises us a serenity future' nice one indeed..you have painted a nice poetic picture while giving deep moral message 10++.

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Dead Poettess 22 May 2009

very nice poem...the figurative language and the pictures drawn are great... i rated 10....

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