Friday, September 28, 2007

When The Lamps Go Out Comments

Rating: 5.0

On any midnight street
Of this morally-bankrupt city,
There is always someone
Ready to bleed and ready to die
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Uriah Hamilton
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Will Barber 07 October 2007

The stark contrast you draw is quite affecting. Love redeems tje squalid reality of desperation, here. Even the desire of true love rescues the soul from degradation. - Will

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Sandra Fowler 04 October 2007

Romance by moonlight. May you and your beautiful girl continue to make poetry together time out of mind. Your song has no end. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra

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Alison Cassidy 28 September 2007

Uriah, this is romantic poetry at its best. I love the contrast between the first stanza and the rest of the piece. The life on the street vs the life in your moonlit room. Again your title is superb. You are a fine poet with a warm heart. love, Allie xxxx

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