Saturday, June 3, 2006

When The Heart Is Dead Comments

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When the heart is dead
The poet should be as well
If he allows verse
To wiggle out of
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Uriah Hamilton
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Sallie Howson 03 October 2006

wow.................................................

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Mary Nagy 15 June 2006

Whether you think so or not......your heart is not dead Uriah! You have one of the most compassionate and caring hearts I have ever (never) met. I only pray you will one day be repayed for all your kindness you show people. Sincerely, Mary

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Ivy Christou 08 June 2006

quite deep Uriah.. I can see where you are coming from in this poem.. excellent!

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Ernestine Northover 04 June 2006

I'd send you a nice big box of sticking plasters Uriah, to stem the flow of good blood lost. Write my friend and keep those verses from wiggling about too much, and get back into circulation as soon as possible. Love Ernestine XXX

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***** ********* 03 June 2006

Yes it is a horrible sight to see poets bleeding all over the place, it is too permanent as you say, better to use the brain rather than the heart at these times. Well done. When the heard is dead, is a provocative title for me, because I don't believe in death, just resting or close for lunch, is a better option. Smiling at you, Tai

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Sandra Fowler 03 June 2006

Tears are very appropriate to the creative experience.without them the poem would have no soul at all. Great write, Uriah. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Sallie Howson 03 June 2006

oh i love it...can i copy and put it on my blog?

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