Friday, December 29, 2017

When The Grass Comments

Rating: 5.0

tomorrow's a new day
when
this
night
...
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Justin Aptaker
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Jane Campion 27 July 2019

An imaginative write full of the night.

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Mahtab Bangalee 17 June 2019

omorrow's a new day when this night Will be forgotten And the light and the might.........../// what a great starting of this poem; enjoyed fully

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Chinedu Dike 17 February 2018

Well conceived and wonderfully written with clarity of mind. A thought provoking rendition elegantly brought forth in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. Really an intellectual work of art. Thanks for sharing Justin and do remain enriched.

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 February 2018

the wind whispers peaceful death over grass reaching for height and the moon in the morning sky and the silver-hot fright reality, existence death, philosophical thinking..... enjoyed reading your poem.. you are an intellectual.. thank you dear poet. tony

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Fog Runner 12 February 2018

Visionary from start to finish. Even without understanding it, I enjoyed the path.

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Justin Aptaker 17 February 2018

I greatly appreciate it. Made my day: -)

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