Friday, September 26, 2008

When The Door Opened Comments

Rating: 5.0

I could hardly breathe,
I was so breathless with excitement!
He was finally here,
After all the long hours
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Scarlett Treat
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Ivan Donn Carswell 06 October 2008

Simply delightful and delightfully simple - to borrow your own erudite phrase! The breathlessness permeates with a fresh expectancy from first line to closure... Rgds, Ivan

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Lawrence Beck 01 October 2008

Lovely sentiments, nicely presented; good job, Scarlett. Larry

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Thad Wilk 26 September 2008

A delight to read this masterpiece Scarlett! It touches th' heart! ! *10plus*! Best wishes! Friend Thad

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Ernestine Northover 26 September 2008

I glad I found the right answer here Scarlett. Lovely romantic piece of writing. Dreamy one too. Lovely. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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