Friday, October 23, 2009

When The Day Dies........ Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everything is wet
when the sun sets
sea shores
soiled feet
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lalitha iyer
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Vijay Menon 28 October 2009

extremely beautiful poem and a very emotional one 10+++

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Rakesh Bedi 23 October 2009

it makes me wonder at the appropriate mixing of poet's intellect n emotions! ! ! the best expression i likes is.... soiled feet/salty land/and silent tears....(i sighed at the fate of tears n their Silence...)

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Ency Bearis 23 October 2009

great introspective write...a wonderful descriptive verses and thoughts of the theme...10

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