Monday, September 10, 2018

When The Dawn Breaks Comments

Rating: 5.0

Morning birds are singing as the dawn breaks-
Hope has taken wings as the dawn breaks
Dreams are awake and eyes are glittering
The island becomes visible as the dawn breaks.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 September 2018

You have brought up a nice imagery of dawn. Definitely richness of nature is full of beauty. Seeing golden reflection we feel surprise. Life hears the call of the beginning of the day. An interesting poem is very well penned...10

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 10 September 2018

Like your poem, the day break is the hope for a different dy. Thanks or sharing.

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M Asim Nehal 10 September 2018

Thanks Mr. Jayatissa

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T Rajan Evol 10 September 2018

Freshness of the morning and start of a new day with new hopes nicely put on.

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M Asim Nehal 10 September 2018

Thanks Mr. Rajan

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Nosheen Irfan 10 September 2018

Amazing description of dawn. Your poem lifts up my spirits. I'm ready to fly.

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M Asim Nehal 10 September 2018

Thanks Much Nosheen Ji,

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