Thursday, June 23, 2011

When The Darkness Falls Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the day is over and darkness falls
You follow the trails of my dreams
Last night you came and walked by my side
And my burden was lighter than it seems
...
Read full text

Göran Gustafsson
COMMENTS
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 23 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Composed well with vivid imagery. Nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Akmal

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success