When The Clouds Chose To Drift... Comments

emotions well absorbed...in the poem lines i mean! good work

well pictorized and the inner warmth felt in ecstasy..................

Your title paints a beautiful poem picture. Wonderful use of metaphor. The warmth of your hand says, 'I am here' in any language.10/10. Love, Sandra

You had such insight in this person using the clouds drifting as a metaphor for depth of feeling. It created pictures in my mind, and this Indira, is what a poet like you writes to give visions to your reader.....10 Karin

yes... you've done your duty here even if you can be the shoulder to one needing person. gentle but firm expressions. loved the poem ma'am. thank you.

Nice thought with apt title made to ponder on. Good craft.

Nice thought with apt title made to ponder on. Good craft.