Sunday, June 29, 2014

When The Clock Stops Comments

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Tic toc thin as air.
With so little of words how do we compare.
Voices in our head.
A short little shelf life then its dead.
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Chinedu Dike 16 September 2014

A prisoner in an invisible cage. An insightful poem with heightened language. Well articulated piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing.

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Colleen Courtney 29 June 2014

Interesting and enjoyable read. Fell in love with the line, painting a whole life, a single brush stroke at a time. Think that's beautiful and brilliant!

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Ace Of Black Hearts

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