When The Brightest And Biggest Star Departs Comments
After spreading her gold for the day
In so many directions and ways
The Sun is ready to depart
And rest to give chance to night
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Yes, every sunset is hope for tomorrow to dawn
Amazing masterpiece of work by a great poet always deserves 10++ and on to the Fav List Well done and thanks for sharing
After spreading her gold for the day In so many directions and ways Rose Marie Juan Austin is ready to depart And rest to give chance to night When she is finally sets on the top list of poets her golden beams create magical means of love and peace Inspiring us to look forward to the beauty of life .
Inspiring us to look forward to A beautiful tomorrow........beautifully crafted the star departs the sun comes the sun departs the moon comes the dark night departs the enlightened day comes the present departs the future comes oh; never come the past but every present greets the every present with the would be FORM like the would be SPOUSE......
The Sun is ready to depart/And rest to give chance to night/When it finally sets above the horizon.......Candid poetic expression! A very commendable piece of poetry! Top score.
I cite the most important two lines (to my opinion) from your delightful poem: Its golden beams create magical color tones That bring warmth to creation...........this occurs during an unrained day, a dry day oft brings golden beams with magical color tones, a wonderful tomorrow. While reading this fascinating poem, I can feel the warmth coming up, dear Mrs. Juan Austin. A 10++++for this golden gem and to MyPoemsList.
A beautiful tomorrow........magnificent......thank u, dear poetess....anjandev roy.
The setting of the sun is one of the wonderful sights to behold...10++❤️❤️❤️
The sun set is beautifully described here! Yes, the setting sun's beams create 'magical color tones'! I love the phrase..... The poem can be seen in a wider perspective. Every setting is a rise into something brighter, loaded with opportunities..! This thought is an inspiring thought that can brighten the gloomy world of today! A well deserved 10 Rose Marie!
Yes without the warmth of the sun we can't move and breathe and think life, the sun epicenter of all living beings......well scripted with depths 10++
This beautiful and colorful, happy poem was a joy and a delight to read.
This short poem speaks of the selfless life of Sun. How he spends his day showering his benevolence (poet says “gold”) on everything. Earth, and of course man, is just one such beneficiary. Then he leaves the scene for the Night-Star to take over. And how is Sun rewarded for his selfless act? The entire universe turns into an ocean of colours to bid him adieu. Naturally. Lovely poem.
A nice poem on a hopeful tomorrow. Marie Juan Austin is on her climax.
A most beautiful and poetically sincere, inspired description of a Sunset. Like finely woven lace images and feelings find their worded grace. A brilliant gem!
A most beautiful poem written by a world class poetess on top of her game. For Rose Marie Juan Austin is poetess who knows how to weave poems of pure gold for one and all that shine. A superb and enchanting poem Rose Marie,10++ and added to my poems of sheer class display cabinet. Take care and I wish you well and the loved ones around you.
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7/20/2025 10:31:39 PM # 1.0.0
Golden beams of love and life! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.