Friday, March 29, 2019

When Tamas Triumphed Comments

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Triumphant, tamas on a pedestal,
Pathetic looked the face of a candle,
And what happened, bit odd,
Truth pushed to hide in pod,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 March 2019

Pathetic looked the face of a candle...this line tells everything! A wonderful Limerick sir..............10

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 March 2019

You are right Dr Swain, thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 March 2019

Truth pushed to hide in pod AND THIS IS SO SAD and thought provoking. You have brilliantly penned this amazing poem.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 March 2019

Reality of life starker than the dark of Tamas. Thank you Kumarmani M.

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