Monday, August 17, 2009

When Sun Kissed The Sea Comments

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Look at the dusking Sun kissing Sea, so divine
Oh blushing Sea, turning into blood wine
I wonder how long this rapture will last
For how long Sun upon Sea its spell will cast
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Dave Tanwar
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Eman Awad 18 August 2009

Firstly, ur rhyming is great and the poem is amazing, many descriptions of nature merged with romance, good work keep up

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Elizebeth Mccallister 17 August 2009

this is such a beautiful poem... bravo! magnifico! romance is this poem

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Dave Tanwar

Jodhpur, India
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