When Started Somewhere With Comments

A super poem, .......Just always when we started something new there is always a challenge, and the challenge is actually is defining our next beginning..like an any invention, first trial always good but the second will always get better and the improvement will takes time, adopt after learning...This is a nice poem, keep it up with more bright side in the future_Unwritten Soul

Yes, this is impressive work...a paradigm for what free-verse is all about...and i'm enjoying each line! ~FjR~

'fate is a gambler, time is no exilir, life is my only teacher'! ! ! ! ! Really a good poem! ! !