When Spring Calls Comments
I sit near the window,
The mountain in view,
The garden's so quiet,
Flowers are few,
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Is that a fairy entombed in amber? During THIS visit, I send this poem to my 'favorites', though my favorites list is full I believe; see their titles & author names in one of MY latest 'poems'.
I see a typo in my comment! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ; (
My wife says: 'It's ok.' I give 5 stars. I don't make a habit of reading any poems to her; I've rarely shared one with her, but I thought this one would be safe to read! : ) bri
The birds are really starting to show up and sing around here. Snow is slowly melting! According to your poem Spring is on it's way! !
Early signs of Spring are alway enticing! So is a window with a mountain view in any season. …and your poetry as it gives window to you and what's in your heart. Thank you for sharing!
Your poetry is so beautiful, and present. You put it all in such wonderful words as to place the entire poem right there in front of us, in our hands, in the reality of our hearts... simple put: your poetry is stunning, I truly love it.
Thoughts of wishing and waiting for the end of a season similar to a patient experience of living
Oh Wow! .. How wonderful! .. So beautifully painted! .. So beautifully expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++
When spring calls, the nature looks up with tender eagerness, dancing in joy....Marvellous poem Jayne....10
Lovely thoughts, I can't wait for spring. Spring is sprung, the grass is prized. I wonder where the birdies is! (sorry grammar police) ...
Winter, crocus and blackbird should not be capitalized, except at the beginning of a sentence.
Grammar should be correct in the format of a poem such as a Sonnet, Couplet or Haiku but within the poem poets are allowed to use ‘poetic licence' which includes grammar and spelling.
POETS CAN DO AS THEY WISH, AND I say your opinion, re which words to capitalize and when, is debatable. But I welcome opinions from readers. Just TRY to be accurate and not offensive.
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7/18/2025 4:52:35 PM # 1.0.0
I honestly wish spring lasted longer than it did