When Spring Calls Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

When Spring Calls

Rating: 4.4


I sit near the window,
The mountain in view,
The garden's so quiet,
Flowers are few,
For Winter's upon us,
Nature's asleep,
The Crocus are hiding,
Getting ready to leap.
Spring won't be long,
A time that I love,
When the garden awakens,
Neath the blue sky above,
The birds are impatient,
To start building their nests,
Their parenting skills, ,
Will again be put to the test,
A Blackbird stands proud,
On the roof of the shed,
He gives a loud call,
As I look ahead,
To bright sunny days,
And clear blue skies,
Can't wait for these cold Winter months to pass by.

Jayne Louise Davies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Grammar Police 22 January 2022

Winter, crocus and blackbird should not be capitalized, except at the beginning of a sentence.

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Jayne Davies 22 January 2022

Thank you for bringing that to my attention😩

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Isadora Quagmire 12 August 2025

Excellent poem! You really do describe spring very vividly! Thank you for sharing!

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Jacob Wentz 19 June 2025

I honestly wish spring lasted longer than it did

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Steve Olver 01 May 2024

How lovely a heart you have

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Thank you Steve : )

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John Carter Brown 22 March 2024

Nice poem. I hate the winter nowadays.

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Thanks John : ) Pleased you liked it.

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Bri Edwards 14 May 2023

I already had blessed this with five stars, Jayne. )

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Many thanks Bri : )

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