Thursday, October 30, 2008

# When Someone Shows You The Path... Comments

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At dawn under the cool shade of the tree
Sitting and listening to his loving speech,

My eyes were brimming with tears.
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Mamta Agarwal
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premji premji 11 November 2008

really, i felt real bliss, real emotions of you while writing this poem 10+++++++

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 04 November 2008

a profound affect may be replaced with a profound effect. [affect is not noun. the passion has been cast with strong mould.

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