Wednesday, April 11, 2007

When Someone Loves You Comments

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I need you darling
I love you so much,
I spend my time
Dreaming of your tender touch,
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Cynthia Cyanide
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Suicide King 22 March 2008

Such a cool little poem lol

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Isaias Rendon 18 April 2007

This one is the best out of new ones added because it has some form, tone, needs some commas. Love and the perception of what we think it is will all change but this took me back to a time when I thought like this. I say this not to offend you or anything but love is different for everyone and that much I respect you for offering a view on love.

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